I think one of the strengths from my paper that I feel pretty confident about was an array of well-chosen language throughout the writing. I think in comparison to the last paper I improved a lot on my word choice and sentence structure in order to convey my ideas more clearly. I also think I did well when it came to incorporating my interview into my paper and using it to strengthen my argument. I think that one of my weaknesses that still needs improvement is sometimes strange word choices. I have a habit of when I’m unable to find the best fitting word for a sentence, going to Thesaurus.com and picking whichever sounds best. I think I need to focus more on the context of the word and using it to strengthen the sentence rather than trying to make it sound more “smart”. I think that overall I used this paper to try and improve upon things I lacked in the last paper like sentence structure, word choice, and insightful analysis. I think that I dug deeper with my points this time and tried bringing my own ideas into the writing rather than recycling what’s already been stated. I also think that I improved on how I incorporated my sources into my writing to strengthen my argument.